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I saw the moon tilt,spill its lavender memories,sprawl across skys organdy lid;and leave me to sweep teardropsthat slump below my eyes.Soft cries prevailat suns decline.A curled moons pallorclutches...
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Chey,The last stanza is a true gem, imo.Great imagery...a keeper for sure!sarah
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Cheyene, this is a lovely read! I do tend to go for the daylight over even the beauty of the night. As has been said, that last stanza is a killer! Wonderful!Jared
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Hi Ken....I'm glad you liked this poem and thought it had a good finish. I strive for that but don't always achieve it! Thank you....chey
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Hi Jared....thanks for your praise of this poem...I'm happy you liked it....chey
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Such a lovely poem, Chey, with beautiful images and as has been said, that last stanza is outstanding.
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I had to come back for a second look, and again it was great. I love how you tie the whole piece together in ways such as using the word "shroud", ect. Love it.
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Hi Blue....thanks for commenting on this piece...I'm glad you liked it....chey
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Hi again, Ken...thank you so much for your words of encouragement...I do appreciate them....chey
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